Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world.What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world.

What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Submitted by obieda on Tue, 04/30/2019 - 19:35

it is often argued that in many urban areas around the globe, the rate of youth violence has increased dramatically in the last decades. this essay will consider the main causes of this issue and then propose some possible solutions.

One of the main reasons of increasing crime rate among young people is poverty. Due to financial crises, a poor father could not be able to meet their children's needs, and this can lead them to get involved in criminal activities such as stealing. Another key factor is the lack of communication between children and parents. this may be because of the fact that many parents in cities now both have to work long -hours in order to give their children support when needed.

In spite of this, there are some feasible actions can be taken. First of all, governments need to create more job opportunities for citizens. this can be by promoting small scale industries which certainly require more employees. More employment opportunities will create a way to financial and mental stability, which resulting in reduce illegal actions among youngsters. In addition, parents should find ways to spend more time with their sons and daughters. If, for example, a father or mother allocate a certain time to have a healthy discussion with their children to know what is going in their mind and life, they are less likely to commit crimes.

To sum up. it is clear that while several factors have led to increases in youth crime, measures are available to tackle this problem.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, then, while, for example, in addition, such as, first of all, in spite of, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91796875 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54265070976 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64453125 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9720411928 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9285714286 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143210337874 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457567458935 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038032502345 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873417451927 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145110578945 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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