Life now is better than it was 100 years ago.
There is no doubt that the world has discovered inventions and offered facilities that effect change in the society. Resulting in these developments, our life has become more comfortable than a century ago. I strongly opine that the public now has convenience time compared to the past periods. That is because, the improvements were happened on the means of transportation and communication that insisted of entrance the luxury into our life.
Through a decade ago, a lot of technologies have been presented to transportation field, since a lot of enjoyments have been provided to make the passenger's trip more relaxation. For instance, BMW company added some technics to its vehicles models such as X5, X7 and X8 for making it more dynamism, so trippers can enjoy with their trip without any obstacles. Nowadays, the cars firms are competing to make their products more opulence to attract purchasers who feel their life become better than past with the provided adjustments. Not only this, the plane industry succeed to get steps in parallel for enhancing its lines; therefore, voyagers can travel among countries without bothering. By passing a time, transport industry could offer more and more services that make the public admits their life has become better than before.
Furthermore, human beings life has been quite developed with appearance of information transfer technology in last fifty years, for the communication makes immediately connect among public wherever they are. The recent study of New York Times newspaper about the telecommunication development in the world describes the folks worldwide rely on this technology by using smart phones that are connected to a network through their daily deals. With a look back, a lot of times were being wasted whether sending a message or calling someone before sixty years. But with contemporary era, the wireless connection and online applications have assisted the society to get convenience life. To illustrate, telecommunications could support the whole universe to save their time.
To sum up, people around the world have enormous changes in their life to the best through last hundred years. That is why, scientists could add modifications and improvements to the means of transportation and communication which make the life more comfortable.
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| 2019-10-31 | Dasiek | 61 | view |
| 2019-08-22 | MahmoudMoawad | 89 | view |
- Life now is better than it was 100 years ago. 89
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
...tter than before. Furthermore, human beings life has been quite developed with appe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, for instance, no doubt, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36338797814 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00767057632 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595628415301 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8045582891 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.6875 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141250199863 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497651813366 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555673265011 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912876916639 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453943066407 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.