Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
The improvement of public health has indeed attracted the interest of many international programs worldwide to promote the production wheel. Although some believe that constructing more and more sports clubs is the best way to enhance sanitation, others think that there are other ways which should be followed to raise wellness rates. I believe that the development of health care programs has a major impact on community health.
Many governments have recently spent more funds in building sports centers to entice overweight people. American Researches Institution, for example, exhibited an investigation study in 2017, about the obese rate in America which reached 40% of American citizens. International health organizations have persuaded the international community whose residents are fleshy to do exercises for preserving their sports bodies; therefore, the process of production can be increased. The world can significantly improve production operations by spreading sports facilities.
However, the officials of the health care association have declared that health care programs have played an essential role in refining general robustness. British Health Institution, for instance, has released reports that hospitals and private clinics could improve public strength by providing medical programs to their patients. Experts and doctors, who are authorized to plan these arrangements, have determined medical standards to raise the efficiency of the human body by utilizing modern technology. The average life rates in the advanced nations have recorded high results as a consequence of their sophisticated medical field.
In conclusion, developed countries are interested in upgrading general verdure to get high-quality manufacturing. In spite of the fact that public health has been enhanced by practicing physical games, the best way, in my opinion, is following the medical programs.
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- Life now is better than it was 100 years ago. 89
- Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. 78
- In many places, large chain stores are taking over the marketplace, making it impossible for small businesses to compete with them what are the advantages and disadvantages of this situation? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90287769784 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.074445512 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618705035971 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9909632336 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.230769231 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258723792388 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857718049989 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569128538106 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151414072662 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504701941516 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.94 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.