Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Global trade and integration have been offering many opportunities for people to travel, study and work overseas. while I accept the fact that there are some difficulties that people would encounter while residing in a foreign country, I believe its benefits may outweigh those drawbacks.
On the one hand, there are some predictable disadvantages that a person may need to cope with at the very first stage of assimilation. Firstly, language barriers may put people down and create unnecessary misunderstandings between foreigners and locals. For example, daily activities including groceries shopping and eating out would be daunting and frustrating, if the language proficiency level is not sufficient. besides, the limited language command might also have adverse effects in studying because people need to learn new concepts, not in their mother lounges. For example, in the states, many international students have reported that they had a hard time understanding lectures delivering entirely in English during their freshman year. Finally, living away from home would cause homesickness which may result in serious depression.
On the other hand, the number of international students and expats have been exponentially increased due to the immense perks of this lifestyle. first one is that living abroad enhances the level of openness when people get the opportunities to expose to different ideas, people and culture. For instance, as a foreign student studying in Singapore, I have had a spectacular experience interacting with friends who are Chinese, Malay, Indian, Caucasian and others. Not only does it open my mind about different cultures and thinkings, but it also enhances my creativity and acceptance towards different perspectives. Additionally, many big corporations require international experience and language skills. Hence, mastering other languages beside people's mother tongue offers the prospective employees more chances to attain higher income jobs.
In conclusion, I believe the advantages and the positivities of living abroad in terms of enhanced openness and career prospects would supersede the trivial disadvantages that this lifestyle may bring.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74233128834 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08374219398 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622699386503 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1720989584 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.8 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0948816088332 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328686737029 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0227721018157 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0528491843982 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261610280113 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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