it is often contentious whether the government budget should focus on enhancing awareness upon healthy eating and active lifestyle or it should be used in hospital bills to support sick people. In my opinion, these two areas need the equal attention due to their profoundly important role in society.
On the one hand, there are many reasons why government should invest its expenditure to encourage people engaging in healthy eating habits and fitness activities. campaigns like this provides a sufficient source of information for its citizen to understand a healthy diet. For instance, educational programs about nutrition have created awareness about the side effects of processed and fast foods, while they recommend the suggested daily amount of fruit and vegetable consumption. Additionally, promoting active lifestyle will not only keep people fit but it will also reduce the risk of diseases like obesity and cancer and. For example, in Singapore, the Health Board has implemented the steps Challenge to encourage people to walk more by tracking their steps daily and giving away rewards in form of vouchers for foods, beverages and groceries, which gathers such a huge success in reducing obesity rates within the community.
On the other hand, patronage from government is still incredibly necessary to support medical treatment due to several reasons. Firstly, citizens have worked and payed tax to the government so they should receive the support when they fall sick. Secondly, it is humanitarian to help poor people who cannot afford their medical bills. In developing countries like Vietnam, the majority of its population suffers from many contagious diseases and cancer without proper care because of their financial disability. Therefore, if they receive the financial support from local authorities, the adequate medical treatments would be attained to fight against the illnesses and probably cure them without worrying about paying bills of exorbitant amounts.
In conclusion, while I believe sponsoring campaigns to enhance the awareness of healthy eating and active lifestyle would benefit a lot of people, government should still pay equal attention and budget to support medical treatment in order to relieve the financial burden for its citizens.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It
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Suggestion: Campaigns
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Message: Did you mean 'encouraging'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: encouraging
...ard has implemented the steps Challenge to encourage people to walk more by tracking their s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52136752137 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73180898574 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.9987194084 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.076923077 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186902956374 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626218381341 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389387396129 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11292682337 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152970808177 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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