From high-tech surgeries to groundbreaking HIV treatments, medical innovation has dramatically improved health outocomes. In wealthy nations, health care spending has risen and lives have been lengthened. As a consequence, also people over their sixties can still have a full life and contribute to make their surroundings a better and brighter place to live.
The elderly have a huge potential that society can take advantage of: they have a lot of experience and are always prompt to give some useful advice to the young people. Furthermore, for parents who have to struggle with shortage of time and low incomes, grandparents represent a formidable solution when it comes to taking care of children, who are usually more willingly to spend their free time surrounded by the kindess of family members, rather than in a kindergarten.
In addtion to this crucial aspect, which allows society to be more stable. people over sixties are still capable of enjoying a fulfilled life. Most of them, after retiring from work, have planty of spare time they use by meeting friends, enrolling at university to complete studies they had given up or just to follow an old but still burning passion. Most of them are socially engaged and share their skills and knowledge to help others. Being mentally and phisically active is therefore not only something they feel have a right to, but it is also something they actively pursue.
To summarize, creating the conditions that allow people over their sixties to be still activ and healthy is a win-win situation. They can play a major role in the society, taking care of their grandchildren or making their precious experience available to the others. Furthermore, researcher have shown that being mentally engaged have a beneficial impact on the health condition, which in turn has a positive effect on the health care spending as well.
- Internet technology means people no longer need to travel to foreign countries to understand how they live Do you agree or disagree 84
- Some people claim that censorship is necessary because there are too many undesirable contents in the mass media while others argue that it will hinder information freedom Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- few people devote their time to hobbies nowadays put your opinion why is it so how it is helpful to both individual and society 84
- Many countries aim to improve their living standard by economic development but some important social values are lost as a result Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages 73
- Some people think parents should read or tell stories to children Others think parents needn t do that as children can read books or watch TV movies by themselves Discuss both views and give your own opinion 79
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 76, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...which allows society to be more stable. people over sixties are still capable of enjoy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, still, then, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11038961039 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77537207721 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597402597403 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4054314128 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.076923077 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198239833617 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781905228742 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841251749284 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134445480842 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928750747713 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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