Library is an essential platform for each one of us to know and explore more things in across all subjects.We know that there are many public libraries which are organized by Universities, Government and other sector. However we can't deny the fact that today's World is evolving into digitalization platform.
Accordingly to this essay topic, it says that the above said Latter is replacing former . In this context , I would certainly agree with it .
Digitalization is booming across globe and it brings more convenient ways in which we carry out any things. Lots of us, use this digitalization daily in our life activities in most aspects like copying Files, taking print out, playing movies in digital CDs and DVDs.Lots of electronic devices are made digital especially Watches we wear , Motorcycle , Cars , Ac having digital technologies.
Sticking to this essay topic, Now days there is steady decrease in total number of people visiting public library owing to digitalization and public libraries are not updated periodically. Using eLearning facilities in online course influencing many students to opt rather than going library to refer books. We can instantaneously get information across
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39893617021 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0239988475 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.712765957447 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.6523889287 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.777777778 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157878122741 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568688027263 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463396030525 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879385206693 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294495498614 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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