Nowadays, world population are increasingly moving from rural to urban places. Many individuals think that in metropolitan cities offering a better life than in villages. I completely agree with the above notion as there are various reasons for it. This essay will discuss my point of view.
There are multifarious advantages of living in cities as compared to farmland. To begin with, mostly individuals are migrated from rural to urban area because of higher education. People know that there are several prestigious schools and colleges which provide quality education and influence more youths to move into the cities. Secondly, a wide range of hospitals and medical facilities are helping people to get a better health. As a result, some sick people are interested to stay in the towns. Irrespective of high living cost as these facilities are made them migrate from underdeveloped places to developed places. To illustrate, a survey conducted on the people relocation, 60% youngsters moving to cities just for the sake of education and medical treatments. Thus, the migration from rural to urban area is increasing rapidly.
Moreover, there is a big issue of employment in villages. Because, there would be not sufficient job opportunities for educated people. Owning to this, mostly highly qualified people interested to stay in big cities for jobs and high salaries. Because, most of the top rated multinational companies like amazon, tcs established their subsidiaries in metropolitan cities so masses can gain employment and offer a handsome salary for highly qualified people. To exemplify, an article published by the Times of India on job requirements, majority of youths going for the job and lifestyles. Thus, these opportunities influence the masses to migrate from rural to urban areas.
In conclusion, countryside people are moving from farmland to towns due to some amenties like employment, education, medical treatments which influence them to migrate in developed places.
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- Scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings Some people find it a positive development while others think it is negative development Discuss both points and give your own opinion 78
- Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of trends and fashions than an indication of what individuals really want to do in their spare time To what extent do you agree with this statement 61
- Many believe that living in a city offers greater benefits compared to life in the countryside To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41987179487 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97727083097 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554487179487 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7182492623 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36842105263 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0927825145125 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318147433665 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567853431507 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0608381908069 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363555381373 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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