In some part of the world, the trend towards people having babies at an older age is increasingly prevalent, while accordingly contribute to the gap between parents and children. In my opinion, while it is beneficial for a better life among children, the drewback including the reduced connection between parents and children is more significant.
In terms of better lives among children, the age gap between parents and children has a positive impact on that because parents are more well prepared for a decent financial condition. After hardworking of many years, parents earned alot of money and become capable of themselves foe fulfiling all the necessities and for better upbringing for their babies. For example, education, clothes and toys so on. In contrast, if parents married in early age they could not be able to accomplish the needs and demands for their pupils. Because, at that time they are not sufficient to fulfil the wants for their children due to shortage of money.
Apart fro. the benefits expressed above , there are some drawback as well. Firstly, ideas and views are vary from generation to generation due to age gap between parents and children. In addition, to this youngster want to become according to their preferences, while parents give priority to realistic factors such as financial and job stability. However, when the gap is not remarkable, they would have some sympathy with each other. Secondly, if parents get married in 35 and 40 years, then they face many complications in pregnancy. Moreover, sometimes a women never give birth to babies.
In conclusion, parents nowadays tend to give birth at an older age as compared to past. Because, of fulfiling the needs for their young ones. But their disadvantages is more than the advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11301369863 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75577351112 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561643835616 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5436710769 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200365972475 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642878507848 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570168561409 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134934372455 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266559747373 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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