In the modern world, a plethora of juveniles are attracted to technological gadgets such as mobile phones, laptops, and PlayStations. However, it is a mixed bag of boon and bane.
On the constructive part, society is blessed with numerous benefits because of the presence of which are worth mentioning. To commence with, the fact of safety benefits of a child. To illustrate, in the event of an emergency, having a cell phone allows a child to contact the police, fire department, ambulance service immediately. Also, they can easily reach out to their parents just by calling on the phone. Besides, GPS is one of the best software which is installed in smartphones that is helpful in tracking down people's location. For instance, if a child went somewhere without informing his or her parents, so, with the help of a mobile phone, parents can easily track down their kid's location. Moreover, juveniles can learn many things by using a phone because of internet availability everywhere in today's world. They can easily take online tuitions of their academics subjects and hobbies or interests.
On the destructive part, there appear to be potential shortcomings from this trend. Chiefly, the negligence of outdoor activities with the advent of the modern technological world. Nowadays, kids and teens like to play games on mobile phones instead of going out to play outdoor games. With such effect, they have harmed their fitness and health. According to a BBC survey, in the USA, half the population of juveniles is affected by a disease known as obesity because of their involvement in mobile phones.
In my view, phones are not only useful to children but also are harmful to their lifestyle if they spend more hours on cellphones. Therefore, it should be a parent's responsibility to teach the importance of using mobile phones in their lives. In this way, this technological gadget will become an asset for teens as well as for kids.
In conclusion, as every coin has two sides, there are pros and cons of using mobile phones whether it comes to children or an adult. However, in terms of juveniles, we should be more careful because they are the backbone of a nation and this mankind when it comes to development and growth in society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 158, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...n cellphones. Therefore, it should be a parents responsibility to teach the importance ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as for, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94459102902 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77255103034 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548812664908 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.76152304609 294% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2055038311 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.95 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152562998436 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447220142302 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408023165661 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0807271234437 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301851916648 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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