In many cities today, most people live in large apartment blocks. Does this kind of accommodation have more advantages or disadvantages?
In modern cities, a huge proportion of population lives in big society houses. Also, there are groups who lives in independent houses or builder floors. Both have their own merits and demerits which I will discuss in this essay further.
To start with, a vast majority of people lives in high rise building complexes, which consists of distinctive dimensions and are spacious as well. The major reason of population considers it a safer option is due to safety reason. There is adequate amount of surveillance camera’s installed in the society along with a placement of guard at the main entrance. So, there is no entry for strangers without permission. Moreover, you can build your social contacts with each other living in the society and arrange more personal or societal events or functions in the premises itself. However, this accommodation might come with some barriers such as you need to seek approval from authority to arrange any individual arrangements in the society premises. Also, there are restrictions as well. For example, I have guests coming into the society, but they had to park their cars outside because of residential rules and it took them lot of time to find an adequate parking.
On the other hand, there are other living conditions such as Independent houses or builder floors people find it useful as per their own convenience. They can enjoy living in these residential complexes without any prohibitions or conditions applied. The houses are constructed as per owner’s choice and they modify the constructions without any approvals unless governmental rules are abided. It has abundant amount of parking spaces. However, it might be unsafe sometimes, as you have neighbors living very far and trespassers can try to invade or rob some valuables in case of non-presence of owner. Also, security cameras are installed as per individual’s preferences. Moreover, chance of building social circle is less as compared with multi-story housing.
To end with, population living in apartment societies have chances of getting social with everyone and are more secure but having some restrictions. The people living in independent houses can enjoy their privacy and enjoy the luxury of spaces but are less secure and unsocial.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: APOSTROPHE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Consider using the plural form here: 'cameras'.
Suggestion: cameras
...here is adequate amount of surveillance camera’s installed in the society along with a p...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 725, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...hance of building social circle is less as compared with multi-story housing. T...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, such as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22527472527 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83875103287 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549450549451 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4054050764 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135739690515 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370084998805 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387536554414 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976492713124 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360169620819 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: APOSTROPHE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Consider using the plural form here: 'cameras'.
Suggestion: cameras
...here is adequate amount of surveillance camera’s installed in the society along with a p...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 725, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...hance of building social circle is less as compared with multi-story housing. T...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, such as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22527472527 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83875103287 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549450549451 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4054050764 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135739690515 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370084998805 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387536554414 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976492713124 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360169620819 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.