In many cities the use of video cameras in public place is being increased inorder to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom. Do the benefits of increased security outweighs the drawbacks.
Many cities and public places are under the camera surveillance these days. Few people argue that, this will reduce the crime rate to a greater extend whereas others believe that these measures restrain individual freedom of people. In this essay, I intend to prove that the merits of these security measures are more than its demerits.
Firstly, the use of video cameras reduce the chance of theft, corruption and other evil activities. To be precise, every action and conversation of the people in a public place is closely monitored. This could generate a feeling that, if they commit any crimes or illegal activities they are likely to be caught by the police. For this reason , the banks and ATMs are under the camera surveillance to avoid any sort of malpractices. Hence, it is clear that the use of video cameras at public places can avoid the misconduct to a great extend.
Furthermore, in certain circumstances, the video clips can be used as an important evidence to bring the culprits in front of the law. That is , the police department usually rely on these video clipings to collect adequate evidence for any criminal or illegal activities at public places. For example, a recent survey conducted by ' India today' magazine for an article on crimal records reveals that the police department lean on public cameras to collect more than 60% of proof in relation with a crime or theft. Thus, the use of video cameras at public places is helpful to bring the culprits in front of law.
However, the use of video cameras at public places restrict the individual freedom of people. The constant surveillance in cities make people feel disturbed and generates a feel like people are not trustworthy which is never a good dynamic as it questions the basic human right of freedom.
To conclude, it is evident to speak that, the installation of video cameras in public place has got more pons than its cons as it increases the safety and security in any public region. In addition to that, it is helpful for the offices to do their duites.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85227272727 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56613503077 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491477272727 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4302152165 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372669960977 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125069857866 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771121827486 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206431304261 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518624070272 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.