Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think that this is a good thing, while others think that it has disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Business endorsement through sports has become a popular way of promoting its products by several organizations these days. While many individuals hold an opinion that this is a positive trend, however, this is being considered as a negative approach by others.
To start with, undoubtedly, the companies are able to reach their target consumers on a larger scale using this brand new way of promotion. Having said that these businesses are booming as people tend to follow their favourite sport or players and buy things that are being advertised by them. For instance, if Mahendra Dhoni, a well-known cricketer, will promote the products such as perfume or a shampoo, his supporters would mimic his style and buy these products.
On the flip side, although this new concept seems beneficial for the merchants, however, there are numerous drawbacks that can be witnessed in the young generation and i strongly agree with this opinion as such adverts allure people buy the things which are not even useful for them. They often end up spending an enormous amount of their money or tend to create a burden for parents for expensive things. Besides, it is quite annoying to see lots of promotions during sports events. The frequency of advertisements during a cricket match is a perfect example of such a nuisance.
In conclusion, whereas promotion through sports has become the most profitable method of generating high revenue by the organizations, in my opinion, people are being tantalized by these endorsements and wasting their hard-earned money on useless products for the sake of sports activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, well, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2030651341 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82185403673 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624521072797 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.7116438459 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.8 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151801672453 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607194416436 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420591697575 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979887391245 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258201596746 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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