Many countries aim to improve their living standard by economic development, but some important social values are lost as a result.
Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?
There was an article about negative sides when quality of living is growing owing to economic developments. However, some sociologists claim that these effects are not important to worry about. This essay will consider both benefits and drawbacks and agrees with social workers.
Let us start with benefits of economic growth. Low unemployment in the country is one of the main merits. Many people, who are out of job, easily find an occupation, when companies start to expand business thanks to economic prosperity. Another beneficial side is an increase in salaries. A competition in labor market for employees due to business expansion often trigger a pay rise, which improves quality of life in society. Moreover, people gain confidence in the future. The more money and work people have during economical stability, the more certain they are in tomorrow and, therefore, take a mortgage for a house as well as have more children.
Despite all the mentions positive sides, economic upsurge has some drawbacks. The first negative effect is that people often stop developing their personality. Employees tend to ignore both improving and gaining soft skills because they do not worry about being made redundant in the labor market, which is experiencing a shortage of workers. In addition, people are prone to surrounding themselves only with successful people. In highly developed economy, humans frequently forget to appreciate others by personality expect status and fortune. Furthermore, the number of divorces increases significantly when a country is developing economically. In Kazakhstan, for instance, husbands often either leave their families or take a second unofficial wife, as soon as they become wealthy.
In conclusion, even though there are some social problems in a financial rise of a country, I believe that the advantages prevail because mankind relationship gradually enriches as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...people have during economical stability, the more certain they are in tomorrow an...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ain they are in tomorrow and, therefore, take a mortgage for a house as well as h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47811447811 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88396761648 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649831649832 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3784231856 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3888888889 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192557307048 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502001236044 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330879602378 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105446551841 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196192408386 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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