In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of the crime?
How can we deal with those?
Crime is undoubtedly the most significant and inevitable factor causing an obstruction in the economic growth of the nation which seems to be a cause of worry for many countries. The origin of this situation seems to stem from mainly two factors while several remedies remain open to us. In this essay, The primary causes will be discussed along with some recommendation to overcome this horrific situation.
Perhaps one of the most important cause is the loose ends in the government arm's law which facilitate weapons to individuals especially the teenagers and adults. This means that any act of anger can allow the teenagers to take the life of innocent victim because of a small fight or any other reasons. For Instance, in 2015 one of the US student was found involved in massacre killing of more than 35 people including teachers as well. In addition to this, the situation remains same as of today with no major further improvement in the weapons law. Secondly, Another cause is poverty which incite mainly the adults to perform unlaw activities while living life in poor working conditions. As a result of this, the crime incidents like robbery, theft and chain snatching activities has been shot up 10 times in the last 3 years.
However, there are number of factors which can help the nations to tackle and reduce the number of crime events in the country. Firstly, Government can open more rehabiliation centres which can bring drastic changes in the improvement of the criminals life while improving their social behaviour as well. If public budget were to spend on establishing these centres it can help in reducing the crime to a big extent. Secondly, Government can introduce new laws in arm's act which can make the policies tighter and can induce people to abide by the law. Failure in doing so can impose a penalty of imprisonment upto five years.
Overall, Government should make changes in their arm's act to stop especially the young children and adults for illegal purposes and these measures would help the economy to reduce the number of incidents of crime in the nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 154, Rule ID: WORRY_FOR[1]
Message: The verb 'worry' does not normally take the preposition 'for'. Did you mean 'worry about'?
Suggestion: worry about
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Line 3, column 538, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'weapons'' or 'weapon's'?
Suggestion: weapons'; weapon's
...ith no major further improvement in the weapons law. Secondly, Another cause is poverty...
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Line 6, column 243, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'criminals'' or 'criminal's'?
Suggestion: criminals'; criminal's
...astic changes in the improvement of the criminals life while improving their social behav...
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Line 6, column 306, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...proving their social behaviour as well. If public budget were to spend on establis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91292134831 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59824476068 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561797752809 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1146692993 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.6 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7333333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184451732509 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608539087489 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403769189487 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105488373041 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431740113563 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.