In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In recent years the world's population has increased drastically and everyone wants work in corporate or study in renowned institutions, most of which are established in metropolitan cities. Besides, living a city life is most of the people's ambition who are raised in rural areas. This has lead to migration of individuals in huge numbers from interior areas of world to cities. This essay will discuss the positive and negative impact of this situation.
Firstly, cities provide us with numerous opportunities for growth in various ways, from quality education to a stable and high income job. People from rural areas flock into the cities to take advantage of these possibilities and settle down. The established companies in these cities tend to hire such migrated people who can work on lower wages which is beneficial for company and simultaneously, the individual is also satisfied as they achieve a stable job and perks of enjoying and settling in city. This in return proves beneficial for cities as well because more other companies will try to establish themselves into respective city comprehending the availability of cheap resources and increasing the revenue for government. For example, after 2000 the city of Mumbai saw a radical increase in population due to migration because it had become a hub for many multinational companies and also many startups were emerging.
However, the mass relocation of people in metropolitans have resulted in reduction of productivity from the native areas. Various activities like farming has reduced gradually due to non-availability of sufficient manpower, parallelly decreasing the cultivation of crops and plants essential in daily diet and increasing the prices of commodities. Also, in cities there is possibility of competitive market where the labour supply is high and job opportunities are scarce, leading to various issues like unemployment, inflation and overcrowding of cities. For example, the policies drafted by Canadian government for immigrants lead to migration of many foreigners to prime cities in Canada. As a result, opportunities are comparatively low to the people who migrated.
To conclude, the emigration of people from rural to cities is a negative trend unless it is well balanced by the government and the people of the country. This can be achieved by government establishing institutions and inviting companies to establish themselves in these rural areas and providing opportunities to native individuals maintaining the harmony.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
In recent years the worlds population has increased drastically an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2135.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46035805627 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16774193931 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526854219949 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 693.9 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0129295933 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.4375 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4375 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203607769768 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737563004785 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458195226576 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13560524219 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437746212851 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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