In many countries both men and women are working full time , therefore it is logical for men and women to share household tasks. To what extent do you agree?
It is increasingly common to see males and females performing full-time professional responsibilities in many countries; for that reason, it is logical for them to share their domestic tasks equally. I completely agree with this view, and this essay will explain the positive outcomes of sharing household duties.
One of the crucial advantages of sharing household chores is that individuals can become physically active. This is important because people are naturally averse to the fitness regimes, and the long working hours add to the physical problems of rigid muscle and sore legs, harming the overall wellbeing. For instance, activities such as gardening and cleaning require a considerable amount of physical activity, which helps in getting the muscles to work. As a result, these daily chores are an effective way to improve the body reflexes, positively influencing health benefits for the individuals and the families itself.
Furthermore, it is vital to acknowledge that the distribution of such tasks provide the opportunity of time that people can employ for updating professional skills. The reason for this is that such capabilities allow professionals to outperform in the competitive job market. To illustrate, technical engineers who always upgrade their abilities as per the market standards have a lower chance of an unexpected job loss in the event of downsizing or restructuring in a company. Conversely, if the individuals of a family are not supporting each other in finishing the daily household work, then the prospects of career advancement will gradually diminish.
In conclusion, I feel that couples and families must share their domestic duties in order to become physically active and to provide them with a chance of becoming professionally successful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, furthermore, if, so, then, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52707581227 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13260894487 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599277978339 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.7087051743 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.181818182 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140086979533 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052463696769 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435088750655 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855928958566 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610661221013 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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