In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important learning and taking responsibility.
What are your opinion on this idea?
Unfortunately, in numerous countries, especially, developing ones, children are employed to work in myriad workplaces. Although, some people disagree with this idea, a few people think it can assist children to learn and experience new things. I personally think it is not a good idea and will discuss my reasons in the following.
As some reasons to disapprove this idea, firstly, children have to do some labor work. In fact, children do not have enough literate to be engaged in the office. As a results they are usually exploited to perform some laborious work. Furthermore, children need to do some entertainment activities in their spare time. Indeed, childhood is the best phase for everybody to enjoy doing their interest. In this way, not only they take pleasure in, they also can discover their talent. To explain more some children are talented in art or sport activities. Therefore, they can spend more time in such field to become skillful.
Nevertheless, a few people have a positive attitude for children’s work. In fact, they believe most subjects in school is theoretical which is not applicable for their future. However, they can practice some skills at work and increase their experience. Although this might be true to some extent, currently, in most schools, pupils also take some practical courses which let them expand their experiences at work. To give an example, in school curriculum, some courses such as doing work in laboratory, gardening, making some crafts and other things has been considered.
To conclude, although work experience and learning new ideas are important for children’s prospect, they can gradually learn them during educational environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rn them during educational environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, nevertheless, so, therefore, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26937269373 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87847950464 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568265682657 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.170716767 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330614013854 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11213103941 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844342357212 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214668708781 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219401871506 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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