In many countries, few people have extremely high incomes compared to the rest of the population. Some believe that this is good, while others say that the government should not allow this to happen. Do you agree or disagree? give your opinion with example from personal experience.
Income disparity among the various professions has remained the bone of contention for most of the countries. However, Some intellectuals insist on keeping the wide margin in the wage distribution while others feel to have a governmental intervention to maintain the wise balance in the national salary structures. My inclination supports the later statement in favor of economic and social prosperity of the country.
Globally, the per capita income of any country is evaluated based on the average income earned by the persons in the given area. The resulting factor will be diminished and represent the low economic growth of the nation if there would be visible huge gaps in income. For example, the country like Brazil and Africa where some people enjoy the best of both the world while others are living on a hand to mouth depicts the snail pace economic growth of that country. Moreover, many times such huge income gap causes anarchy in the country which can prosper the crime rate and social war nationally. To exemplify, many bureaucratic countries like Iran and Iraq, huge wage gaps identified due to the absence of suitable rules pertaining income standards.
On the other hand, the countries where governments indulge in defining pay scales for various jobs based on the skills and work associated with it can show steady economic growth on the world map. To illustrate, In India, the minimum wages related to all kind of jobs are getting declared by government twice in a year which is eventually executed to every industry.What is more, The probability of developing social indifferences and inequalities will be declined due to justified salary gaps. People are getting justified salary signifies the prosperity of that country.
To conclude, equal salary distribution will remain always in favor of the collective growth of society and the country. Thus, I strongly believe that every government should keep close eye on the national wages arrangements and should review on regular intervals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, kind of, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79064540477 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563076923077 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.4860182826 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.769230769 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12034760317 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418224314904 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299902299718 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726860407925 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.012974170363 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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