In many countries good schools and medical facilities only available in cities. Some people believe that new teachers and doctors should work in rural area for few years, but some think everyone should be free to choose where they work, discuss both and give opinion.
In most of the nations, rural areas do not get as much attention as cities and towns get, hence they lag behind in facilities and development. This essay initially discusses both the views of sending young workforce to undeveloped rural areas and letting them choose the place of work on their own and in the end favours for sending them to countryside for some time.
To begin, new doctors and teachers should be sent to the countryside for some time for the upliftment of the area. For instance, newly graduate have higher level of motivation and excitement to do something for the nation. Thus, with all their strength they work to impart or use their knowledge. Not only the villagers but also the graduates also get benefited from it by gaining real life experience in their field. This helps to cover the development gap between cities and countryside.
On the other side, some people oppose this idea. The first reason for that is, every person has his/her own right to choose the place for their work where he/she wants to give their service. For instance, some might prefer self convenience, whereas others might choose how they can benefit others. The second cause comes as not each and every human is keen/capable to work in adverse environment, such that, urban people are used to many routine facilities that might not be available in villages which might bother them.
To conclude, governments or organisations should send newly graduated youngsters to undeveloped rural areas; however, this should include only those who volunteer for this. This way they will not be forced and those interested can facilitate the villagers. Additionally, institutes should provide extra points to this work to attract more students towards the help of rural progress and development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 268, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
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Line 1, column 268, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ped rural areas and letting them choose the the place of work on their own and in the e...
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Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...itement to do something for the nation. Thus with all their strength they work to im...
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Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...pose this idea. First reason for that is , every person has his/her own right to c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, thus, whereas, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0612244898 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61741016401 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598639455782 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1702340931 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.285714286 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335969135876 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104701952826 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669432166036 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192491006562 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225282508241 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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