In many countries, government like to spend more money on arts. Some people agree with this. However, others think government should spend more on health and education. Discuss both the sides and give your opinion.
While, there is a contradiction to beautify country to attract tourist, medical facilities should be kept on priority with proper education. I opine that the country’s progress depends on less number of deaths and also on good universities which gives rise to good brains.
First of all, I believe that in order to be ranked among top most developed countries it is necessary to keep an eye on the medical facilities. As far as excellent doctors are diagnosing patient, people will not lose life. Moreover, superior quality of amenities when given to health workers always support mankind. Besides, adequate education has to be granted in order to create niche hospitals. For instance, recent pandemic due to covid-19 has given the proper insight that spending on medical infrastructures, medicines, health care unit will always support to save the life of others. Failure to medical system has reported in many deaths like in Pakistan. Thus, it is worth to donate for the health centers rather, spending just on arts and beautifying country.
Secondly, it has been observed that in order to boost economy it is mandate to take care of beautification of the country. With the increased interest in travelling, people have started exploring cities and countries which results in growing income in tourism. Government has not only started investing in tourism but also taking proper care how to promote it. For example, different states like Jammu and Kashmir very well known as heaven on the earth have started giving their tourism tenders to different digital agencies to portray the beauty in order to attract tourist. Therefore, country’s economy directly dependent on the number of tourists travelling across the countries.
In my opinion, with the advancement of education system and proper facilities given to doctors will make the country worth living without brain drain.
To recapitulate, I would rather say, without spending big part of money in creating good doctors with excellent education country will’t fail in any pandemic. However, at the same time a part should be given to make country beautiful to promote travelling.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27034883721 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75166347987 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5963047517 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.647058824 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58823529412 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186126176884 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541903394488 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331099513259 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987808447513 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021524677611 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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