Many animals are being hunted to the brink of extinction in order to fulfill the demand and greed of mankind for decorative purposes as well as for other reasons, such as traditional medicine.
How can this issue be tackled?
It is often argued that chasing of animals since ancient times for food and beautifying houses and also for curing diseases is leading to disappearance of animals. It can be taken care of by relying on the alternative resources to satisfy the needs rather killing of speechless species.
One of the major reason of dogging of animals is the handsome amount of money smugglers gets by selling off the skin, the trunk and other parts of the animals that can be utilized in many sectors. Bones of tigers are used for making wine and glue and in turn benefits sellers in earning graceful money. This can be stopped by imposing different laws and fine. For example, in South Africa, there was serious hunting issue in 2010 and the government has implemented such laws that if anyone is found guilty, he or she will be strictly punished as well as heavily penalized. As a result, 70% of the poaching animals by human being declined as compared to precious couple of decades.
It is often seen that most of the people uses elephant trunk for making jewelry and musk deer meat is used for medicinal objectives such as for cardiac and other respiratory problems. This can be taken care of by buying certified products like by asking shopkeepers to let people know the things are not made by using animal parts. The illegal wildlife trade can be stopped if people are made aware by advertising by government and make them alert by observing what is happening near to them and reporting if coming across to any such kind of articles getting prepared with the involvement of animals.
To recapitulate, large numbers of animals are being killed to serve the different purposes. However by keeping eye and with correct laws on illicit trade of animals, this problem can be taken care in a settled manner.
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- Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or that they find the most interest Discuss both sides and give your opinion 91
- The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime Do you agree or disagree 79
- In the last few decades there are more and more cases of people being hounded by the press Some people think that famous people in media have no right privacy To what extent do you agree 93
- Most artist earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work To what extent do you agree 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, as for, for example, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77564102564 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51621957443 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.9649014745 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.166666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334959995827 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11615849965 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409253439486 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192398372596 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618490778074 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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