In many countries more and more young people are leaving school but unable to find jobs. What problems do you think youth unemployment causes for individuals and the society? What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters?
While many students graduate from school, there is an unemployment issue which is increasing rapidly. Young people are facing difficulties to find jobs or unable to find a job related to their field of study. I will discuss what problems does youth unemployment cause to individuals and the community as well as the methods that can be adapted in order to lower down this trouble.
Unemployment is a worst situation that demotivates youngsters and put them in a stressful consequence. Youngsters doubt whether they are capable of finding a job and it also discourages their motive to aspire a successful career. On the other hand, it becomes problematic for the socities to see the situation as they get anxious about their young children who are to leave schools in the future. It weakens their role of motivating their pupils to study hard and earn good education because they are always concerned about the current situation which may not get better. For example, during the massive recession in China, parents stopped sending their children to schools basis the situation of unemployment at that time.
Although, unemployment issues cannot be removed completely, but promoting globalization and running local businesses can help in decreasing the unemployment rate. In this era, globalization has become widely popular and supporting tool for nations that helps in many ways. Government can encourage international firms to invest in their country by offering several tax redemptions. Subsequently, multinational companies may start their business in that country that would bring many opportunites for people. Moreover, people should be encourage to run their own businesses by offering loans and ideas of some profitable work. Therefore, it would be a source of income for the owner and would also create jobs for others. For instance, Philippines helps its citizens to start a business by offering low interest rate loans and providing assistance to start a business.
To conclude, It becomes a troublesome situation for youngsters to survice in less employment crisis. However, the issue can be reduced by liberalizing some financial barriers for international organizations and by assisting the local communities to be self-employed and provide help to others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...r down this trouble. Unemployment is a worst situation that demotivates youngs...
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Line 5, column 536, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'encouraged'?
Suggestion: encouraged
... for people. Moreover, people should be encourage to run their own businesses by offering...
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Line 5, column 546, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'running'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: running
...e. Moreover, people should be encourage to run their own businesses by offering loans ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3837535014 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05102843156 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5978491679 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.058823529 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259521772948 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802590405183 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484147348829 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158927573651 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846654007095 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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