More and more measures to improve the security in large urban areas have been introduced in many countries because of the increased crime. Do the benefits of these measures outweigh the drawbacks?
In today’s era, the crime ratio has increased dramatically. It has been a major concern for many countries to secure the posh areas where most crimes happen. However, several measurements have been taken into consideration to strengthen the security in the urban areas.
Governments around the world are increasing patroling and using CCTVs to keep an eye on criminal activites. There are frequent visits by police to check for any unlawful act as well as cameras have been used to check all time activites and keep looking for crimes. Therefore, either crimes are being stopped on time or instant help is provided to the public. In addition, it has helped the country in becoming a safe and peaceful place for people to live. For example, in Japan, every street in urban areas has CCTV cameras that are smart enough to identify crimes and informing the police department about it.
On the other hand, it costs a huge amount for the government to buy cameras that sometimes become difficult for poor countries to buy. Under-develpoed countries couldn’t get cameras for urban area because of their high prices. Consequently, crime rate in such nations increases rapidly which becomes a problem for the government and the society. To illustrate, in Lahore, Pakistan, more than 90,000 theft cases are reported every year because of lacking advanced security.
Avoiving criminal activites are of utmost importance for the safety of every individual. In my opinion, such measurents have contributed enough in reducing the crime ratio which undoubtedly is advantageous for the nations. In addition, it doesn’t only decreases crimes but also pressurize people to not to do such illegal acts.
To conclude, safety measurement is essential for every country and people. Though, security methods are challenging for some countries but its benefits to the society should not be ignored as it helps in controlling crimes which is a significant concern.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, as for, for example, in addition, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23885350318 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80008758549 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592356687898 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9052714336 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7647058824 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76470588235 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25107152655 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081852091791 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570331640397 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153548361454 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781069575761 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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