In this present world, transportion system serves as the base for development. But many countries spent more amount for its development in urban areas, with out giving enough attention to rural areas. This imbalance has led to many burning issues.we are going to discuss both the detrimental impact and also the possible solutions to deal this .
To start with, every government should focus for a balanced development ,as a result allocating equal share of money for all regions is of paramount importance to the society. Otherwise, this can lead to migration of more people from less accessible areas to cities, which inturn cause many pragmatic problems such as pollution, destruction of ecological balance, abandoning of village. Most severe among these will be tainted environment because towns have to deal with more crowd and waste .
Further more, remote areas are often considered as a good source of income. Tourism and agriculture can be taken as the best examples. Former provides a huge foreign exchange also it constitute as the back bone of economy. Majority of pristine locations, which attract a lot of visitors especially those from abroad, are located far away from city cemtres.if the roads and other commutation facilities connecting these places are not maintained effectivley, then it will affect the number of people opting to visit that place. Hence, this will adversly affect the revenue of not only the government but also the locals. Likewise, the modern day amenities like hospitals, industries and multi national companies will not prefer such areas where conveyance is a problem.
As this is a alarming cocern, governments have to negotiate it effectively as soon as possible. For that , first initiative that should be adopted is, while presenting the annual budget for a financial year special focus must be given to under developed areas. So that the gap is bridged. Another method is identifying the cheapest and efficient mode of transportation and implementing them with private help, for example build organise and transfer method adopted by indian government is perfect for huge country like india.
In conclusion, a balance in development is crucial for a society to thrive. So every effory should be made in this regard.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, likewise, so, then, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26721763085 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8000279408 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63085399449 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7577156226 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.222222222 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216833042685 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633907239946 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563871396789 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120253429422 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720661136212 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.