In many countries, as people are earning more these days they are also spending money in buying more and more items. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Over the past few years, there has been a significant growth of the income which lead a great rise in the amount of money being spent by people. I personally believe that it obviously has a positive impact on various aspects.

To begin with, these increasing spending cultures are most likely to contribute broaden economical aspect. It is no doubt that we need sufficient money to fulfil our basic needs:food, shelter and healthcare services. As the majority of them are wealthy enough in these days, those who receive excellent pay packages, compared to the past, are potentially important customers among manufacturing companies, and their frequent spending behaviors on such company's products will directly result in the profit which can be invested to the development of the new products. In this spending and production systems, not only the host company will be beneficial, but also any other companies related to the new product, such as manufacturing factory or design, advertising firms will have the opportunities to prosper in the future, that will promote economic development and accelerate GDP growth.

However, I believe that this sense of the economic success of the well-spending culture is applicable to another field. People spend their money on buying more items, such as having dinner with friends, participating in sports or watching a live performance, this trend would result in job creation and a high level of employment, which can be seen as a positive impact from the perspective of the country. Furthermore, such a strong economy and employment of the nation can help a country's standing on the global stages in terms of its political influence and trading power.

In conclusion, it is obvious to me that the increased spending behaviors can have the remarkably positive consequences in the various aspect of the nation.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24496644295 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94611188592 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620805369128 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.2799730077 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 173.666666667 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1111111111 20.7667163134 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4444444444 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150397071163 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540090000894 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488919671877 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0786557790061 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372316377188 0.056905535591 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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