In many countries people are living in a "throwaway society" where things are used for a short time and throw away. What are the causes of this and what problems does it has? Give your own example.
In the current scenario,people want to enjoy the materialistic lifestyle. With the advent of the contemporary technology, it is observed that the citizens use more disposable products then ever before. This essay will outline certain core reasons,like these products are economic and quite comfortable,and discuss its downsides on the environment and society.
To begin with, there are copious causes behind today's use and throw culture. First and foremost reason is that disposable goods are quite economic compare to others. It is because of the fact that the production cost of these products is very low which make it possible for consumer to get it easily at cheap rate. Another obvious reason is that these goods are more comfortable to use. To support this with an evidence, people can easily carry disposable dishes,glasses and plastic bags which not only need less space but also easy to carry at anywhere during travelling.
Consequently, this throwaway culture would deteriorate the environment. One arduous effect is that the majority of disposable products are manufactured from non-degradable sources or raw materials. As a result, it may engender to harmful effects, like air and land pollution at the time of their production and destroy. Furthermore,the waste management is another biggest pressing issue because people throw waste of used items at anywhere which become stumbling stone for local government to collect waste and clean place. For example, as per report from the department of tourism,India in 2018, nevertheless ample numbers of dustbins, tourists throw used plastic bags, dishes anywhere at tourist place in India which deteriorate the environment.
To sum up,presently,people across the globe are using more disposable items because of reasons like they are cheap and easy to carry, however this trend may lead to serious repercussion not only to the environment but also to the society as this products' manufacturing leads to pollution and waste management is burning issue.
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also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, for example, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43312101911 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08428926618 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576433121019 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3488755114 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.857142857 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123855183844 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428060652614 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303311273063 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743956170845 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199941910331 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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