In many countries, people have more health problems because they choose to live an unhealthy lifestyle. What do you think are the reasons for this and how can it be solved?
Suffering with lots of diseases have become common among the people from different places due to the adoption of some irregular routine. I personally believe that too much consumption of fast food and less physical workouts are the main reasons, but problems can be solved, by eating food contains with nutrition and doing regular exercise specially in the early morning can protect humans from these ailments.
Liking a food with extra fats, spices and cholesterol is a foremost reason of health problems like obesity and digestion disorder. It is because these cuisines are very tasty, people place order for it on daily basis which spoil the balance of liver and become a reason of food poisoning or dehydration. Moreover, people avoid walk, rather they use vehicles for moving from one place to another place, which gain the body cholesterol and become the reason of increasing their weight regularly. Therefore, modern lifestyles are impacting adversely on individual’s life.
As we know solutions are not out of reach, daily exercise and yoga practices can provide relief from there situations, because during those movements people stretch almost all body parts which can help the intestine to work properly. Apart from this, eating food consist minerals, vitamins and protein give power to the body to fight against severe diseases. For example, during the winter season an ayurvedic medicine name chawanprash improve the immunity power of human so that they can fight against common diseases like congestion, flu and cough. Hence these techniques can protect a person from any serious diseases.
Conclusively, spending miserable life with dangerous diseases are being common among the residents of various countries. This is just because of the love towards Italian or Chinese food which do not dissolve in the body properly and give them harm. A prevailing era also make the man lazy from physical workouts. But prevention is better than cure so, doing daily yoga practices and eating healthy food are the good solutions to keep the body fit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
...humans from these ailments. Liking a food with extra fats, spices and cholesterol...
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Line 9, column 380, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'winter'.
Suggestion: winter
...st severe diseases. For example, during the winter season an ayurvedic medicine name chawanprash ...
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Line 9, column 552, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...iseases like congestion, flu and cough. Hence these techniques can protect a person f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27190332326 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56670307895 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616314199396 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.200611891 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.642857143 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182335211939 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569654412312 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330618903534 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107014441552 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165862304391 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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