In many countries the proportion of older people is steadily increasing.What problems will this cause for individuals and society?Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
Given that birth rates have declined in most countries, this has led to an increase in the number of elderly in these countries compared to young people.I will give examples of problems and solutions to them in the following paragraphs.
The rate of population aging has increased significantly in many countries around the world. Currently, 8.5% of the world's population is over 65 years of age.The aging process of the population has negative effects on different cultural, economic, social areas.According to studies by some research institutes, the aging of the population is a threat to the economies of countries as well as to the world economy, which poses many problems in the health and medical fields.And governments have to spend a lot of money on the health of this segment of society.On the other hand, the growth of the old population means that there is less youth workforce in the countries, which slows down economic growth and closes factories.
At the present time, the majority of the world community, with the abolition of population control policies, are seeking incentives to increase their population so that the Sunni Pyramid does not tend to age.One of the incentives considered in countries geared towards aging are financial incentives for family caregivers, especially mothers who are pregnant or have some form of state support and encouragement after childbirth.Second, governments can increase the workforce for many years by raising the retirement age from 65 to 70. People at this age can still be productive.As a result, the budget that the government has to spend on the health of the elderly is funded here.
In conclusion,there are many measures that governments can take to solve the problem of increasing the aging population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, still, well, as to, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24125874126 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06796215818 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541958041958 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 211.576621267 49.4020404114 428% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 249.833333333 106.682146367 234% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.6666666667 20.7667163134 230% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.5 7.06120827912 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18635923451 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106951528886 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0153815545164 0.0667982634062 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117459216762 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202514800739 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.1 13.0946893788 207% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.0 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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