Some businesses prohibit smoking in any of their offices.Some governments have banned smoking in all public places.Do you agree or disagree that this is the right course of action?Give reasons for your opinion.
There are different rules about not smoking. Some companies have banned its use in offices. And some governments have enacted laws that prohibit people from smoking in public places.I will state my opinion in the following paragraphs.
Let me illustrate the three benefits of smoking in this article.First of all, most people smoke to get rid of the stresses of life and see it as a way to relieve stress, especially during tests and problems, and everyone should be free to smoke or not to smoke.Secondly, all countries earn huge amounts of tobacco tax each year, and if the source of this tax is lost, governments lose their important source of finance for their country.Third, the tobacco industry is one industry in every country, especially in the Central American countries, where many people become unemployed as the industry closes.
Despite the positive aspects of smoking, smoking has many damages to human health.Statistics show that if thousands are killed by road accidents, hundreds of thousands of people worldwide each year suffer from heart disses and cancers such as lung and larynx due to cigarette smoking and eventually die from smoking cessation.Cigarettes also contaminate human life and increase the amount of dioxide in the air. And it causes air pollution.Research shows that smoking in public places like hospitals and shopping malls is more likely to harm non-smokers, especially children and the elderly.And children with parents who smoke are three times more likely to smoke than non-smokers.
In conclusion,I believe it is true that the disadvantages of smoking outweigh the benefits. But people must be free to choose to smoke, and governments can prevent smoking by increasing the amount.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, third, in conclusion, such as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29710144928 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09110424215 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605072463768 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 188.166149985 49.4020404114 381% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 182.75 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.375 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274136199408 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122470243724 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723440312453 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176667996471 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600718127775 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.0946893788 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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