In many countries the television telecasts many foreign made programs. The dominance of imported entertainment is harmful to the cultures of these countries. Do you agree or disagree with this?
Television is the part and parcel of life because it is one of the dominant source of entertainment and information. Many internationally directed programs are telecasted on the television these days and some people think that foreign episodes are harming the regional culture of the Home country. However, these programs are beneficial to the society at a macro level.
Firstly, serials which are produced internationally help to broaden the mental ability of an individual. In other words, all the countries of the world are functioning on different technologies and same technology is displayed in their telecasts which helps to enhance creativity and imagination of the person watching it. Furthermore, these also provides information about the happenings around the world which in turn increases the general knowledge of an individual.
Another principal benefit of these series is that it provides insights about the culture of another countries without even travelling physically to these countries. As it is impossible for people to visit different countries in order to gain information about there cultures so these programs are of great relevance. In addition, apart from cultures one also gets to know about the cuisines and the heritage places of different countries.
On the contrary, while watching imported programs some of the relevant national news and documentaries are left ignored even though they are of great significance. Also, people tend to follow foreign celebrities instead of showing interest in the local talent which somewhat demotivate the national stars because local stars put in their effort to entertain the local public.
In conclusion, I disagree that imported entertainment is harmful to the culture of home country because it enhances the knowledge of an individual, and also provides them better understanding about various nations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 51, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, while, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5625 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03108095812 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534722222222 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.405017234 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236695592154 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813178261677 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683374497541 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127907627355 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778467387458 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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