Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Recidivism is a significant issue because after being released prisoners face numerous difficulties when reinterring society, making them more likely to repeat an offence. Some solutions can ve taken to tackle this problem.
Firstly, it is hard for former prisoners to obtain employment after imprisonment. Spending years in jail they do not have the opportunity to gain proper work experience that qualifies them for a job. Also, lack of vocational skills as well as literacy makes ex-convicts only qualified for low-skill, low wage employment. Moreover, some business owners are reluctant to hire person with criminal records. All of these factors have created a barrier for former prisoners to gain a job after release. Consequently, they tend to return to their criminal life as a survival method. Secondly, the sense of isolation and discrimination among communities is another leading factor for recidivism. Inmates in the post-release period are prohibited from any financial assistance and loans to run a business on their own. Additionally, they receive a negative attitude and the untrust from the community despite their rehabilitation and behavioural changes. The condition urges them to re-enter the criminal pathway.
There are some solutions to decreasing the recidivism rate. The first approach is to focus on long-term educational and vocational programs for offenders during the prison time. In reality, these activities take place only in a short time such as several weeks or months before the release, which does not relay help. Therefore, it is crucial to have a long and systematic plan focussing on high school diploma education, college degree programs as well as vocational skills. These programs will equip prisoners with essential skills that they can utilize after being released into society. The second solution is providing the ex-offenders with job opportunities and offering some financial packages to support them to establish new business. When they are employed and have a source of income to sustain their lives and fulfil their basic necessities the likelihood that they will engage again in crime will decline.
In conclusion, it is a fact that significant numbers of criminals have returned to crime after a period of incarceration. This reality is the result of multiple factors. Hence, the combination of several solutions should be adopted to tackle the problem
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...to sustain their lives and fulfil their basic necessities the likelihood that they will engage ag...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... should be adopted to tackle the problem
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2040.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95141819018 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594666666667 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9679613353 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7272727273 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0454545455 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153025339392 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444194340912 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316020007019 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956917997102 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00605520835281 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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