Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or
nursing homes.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
In past decade care home have become too prominent as a home for the elder folks of the family. They are not taken care by their children in old age. In this essay we will look at both the benefits and drawbacks of the view.
To begin with, there are multifarious advantages of living in shelter homes. Firstly, they will have all the necessary facilities required to take care of people who are higher in age. For instance, they will have stair-lift to take physically weak individuals from one floor to another, also they will have proper fooding and peaceful atmosphere which is a prerequisite for elderly people. Secondly, all of them will be in same place and can, understand and support each other better than anyone.
Despite that it is not all positive, there are various flaws with nursing homes especially because of today's generation. Nowadays, children put their parents in foster homes because they are loosing respect for them. They treat elderly as burden and want to get rid of them at the earliest. Such lack of empathy deeply hurt feelings of any individual. Another, reason is that during their last time no family member would be present with them.
In conclusion, drawbacks far outweigh the positive especially when moving parents or grand-parents to an elderly home. Also, this decision should be thoroughly though out step as it affects both the generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97008547009 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55898706241 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636752136752 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5884210704 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0714285714 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188295370744 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627118296379 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414022802837 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112469613863 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506903916412 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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