Many films and music pieces are free on the internet. Is this a good or bad development?

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Many films and music pieces are free on the internet. Is this a good or bad development?

Many films and music pieces are free on the internet.
Is this a good or bad development?

There is no doubt that the Internet has led to a dramatic expansion in the number of free music and movies. In my opinion, I believe that this is a bad trend for several of reasons.

The most significant reason why I think that free media on the Internet encourage people to spend many hours each day watching a movie or listening to a music. The problem with this is that these excessive hours in front of a computer or TV can often result in weight problems. Although watching a movie by itself does not cause people to gain weight, spending too much time sitting in front of a screen without doing exercise can result in obesity. Conversely, if films and songs were not free, the number of people consuming them would decrease dramatically.

Alongside the weight problems mentioned above, I believe that this abundance of free media could lead to confusion on the part of the average user. People usually are tempted by free products, and this explosion in free movies and music can make them confused about which song or movie to consume. On the other hand, I would argue that, it would be less confusing for people if these media were costing a different amount of money, as people would take into account the price factor when making a purchase decision. Another concerning issue that typically the income of films crews and singers is paid by selling these movies and songs, and it would be extremely unfair for them to cut down their salaries by providing their hard-work on the Internet for free.

In conclusion, uploading films and music pieces for free on the Internet would have negative effects on the people who are consuming them and on the entertainment industry.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, so, i think, in conclusion, no doubt, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74276527331 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46639514543 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533762057878 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6303231519 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.461538462 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382617842775 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180277630953 0.084324248473 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.184904778081 0.0667982634062 277% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316970700907 0.151304729494 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.19452311381 0.056905535591 342% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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