Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many countries focus their attention to develop the nation financially as their main aim. But, some may believe that improvement in other areas are equally beneficial for the well being of citizens.This essay will examine the both sides of the argument.
It is undoubtedly true and many may say that the economic progress is the major goal of the most of the governments these days. In fact, a wealthy nation enjoys high standards of living compared to a poor nation. In other words, if a government has gain its financial security, it would be able to fulfil the various needs of the people of the country without hesitation. For instance, it is evident that, governments could spend its infrastructure such as roads, railways, airports, harbours and many more as if that government was financially strong. Because of this, it is justifiable that economic growth is pivotal for a developed nation.
On the other hand, according to my point of view, mere financial strength cannot bring the prosperity for a country. Other aspects of the development is crucial for the fulfilment of the population. For an example, where there is less crime in the country, there is a feeling of more security among citizens as well. In order to gain this success, governments have to make efforts to establish the fair legal system as well as moral and ethical accountability of the nation. Moreover, fields such as health, education, agriculture and numerous others have to be developed although there is a economic growth to build as a whole. This is clearly evident that the United States of America, the giant of the world economy, is now experiencing the huge increase in youth crimes in advance despite their huge success in wealth.
While some argue that the financial progress would be the major concern of the government, there are number of reasons to make agendas on developing other aspect of the development of the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in fact, such as, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97213622291 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78520787276 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544891640867 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1926820533 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.714285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207597046395 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723985516677 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563507929223 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124747967493 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328803336388 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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