Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Essay topics:

Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

There has been considerable debate in recent past whether the entry into any museum should include a fee or it should be at free of cost. I think the pros of the inclusion of entry fee to museums outweigh the cons. These will be discussed more in details with examples in following sections.

Most museums all over the world contains rare collections of historical items that are being considered priceless or irreplaceable. The maintenance of these items require periodic servicing from specialists experienced in antic objects or paintings. For example, British Museums have ample pieces of celebrity idols made with only candles. These requires them to keep the room temperature at a certain cooling level. Unless there had been no air conditioning system, those idols would have been eventually evaporated. The periodic cost of running the museum at level best, an entry fee is necessary.

Some might argue that charging people who discourage them to visit museums but these could be applicable for smaller-portion of the visitor having low-income potential. For example, our National Museum entry fee is borne by the government for greater benefit of our mass visitors for the sake of educating our next generation.

In summary, I strongly believe that the entry fee to most museums should be charged for keeping them well and attractive.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, well, for example, i think, in summary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20642201835 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80890179588 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642201834862 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2999600639 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5833333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228632054857 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820876037834 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708320148594 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151714986422 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553401676231 0.056905535591 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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