Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
It is said that that when a man is denied the right to live the life he belives in, he has no choice but to become an outlaw . Thus,crime is increasing in the prodigious society .There must be some reasons behind this surging of crimes .However,it is pondered that offenders commit ore crimes after serving the first punishment .Below light will be shed upon its reasons and solution for the problem .
First of all,the main reason can be the "Need for money".After getting the first punishment ,offenders becomes against the authorities because during the punishment they have to face their harsh behaviour.Thus mental problems can be uplifted and in order to overcome this they stared taking drugs,alcohol etc, because of which they need more money and ultimately throwing themselves into the world of crimes .And the another reason is the "Bad company". In the jails , offenders can meet more dangerous criminals and due to effect of these criminals one also commit more crimes after releasing from jail.
Further,knowing solutions of the above goven problem is even holding more priority.Firstly,there is exigency in the changing of crime related legislation or laws.And the second soultion is "Probation".Probation is a good way to reduce prison overcrowding ,but it must only used for those who have commited minor crimes .The last and most important solution "Rehabilation".It is important to rehabilate criminals while their are in prison otherwise they may re-offend when they release.
In a nutshell,there is a need to treat the criminals in a well mannered way and they should be given equal vistas as the normal people have.Through this way, one can eradicate the prodigious crimes from the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, so, thus, well, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34657039711 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.65571784458 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606498194946 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 148.374245294 49.4020404114 300% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 246.833333333 106.682146367 231% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.1666666667 20.7667163134 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.6666666667 7.06120827912 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257042285613 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128823003581 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07932977222 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155053980458 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635175926128 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.9 13.0946893788 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.33 50.2224549098 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.64 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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