Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nation's history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by new ones. How important is it to maintain old building?. Should history stand in the way of progress?
Lots of nations are protecting their historical places as it's a part of their old heritage. However, some people nowadays think it might be better to invest more effort, attention, money in other more lucrative field. This essay will explore the significance of maintaining such historical places as well as the impact of history on our progression.
Old and historical places are usually viewing our great civilization. For example, Syria is one of oldest country around the world. There are several historical places and territories like Tadmur City and Old Damascus City. Both sites informed us many historical stories about very old generations who were lived there. These old tales have been participating in evolve our current life by displaying some experiences. Old buildings and sites might participate in flourishing the economical situation for any country. Jordan as an example has very few lucrative natural sources. Therefore they are relying on tourism to improve their economy. Thus, they maintain some historical sites like Al-Battra territory which attract more than 5 million visitors annually.
History indeed made our presents and help us a lot to avert many mistakes. For instance, The National Museum of Egypt has many articles and manuscripts which belonged to the old Egyptians. These manuscripts which was posted in their caves and homes show some ways of living thats helped the next generations to acquire more experiences. This great succession of historical experience has made our innovative era. Thats why history stand to flourish our progression.
In conclusion, History made the present and will definatily contribute in building the future. Therefore, history isn't an obstacle on the way of improvement but it's the vital tools for having better life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39145907473 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8144404348 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615658362989 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8882105597 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.7368421053 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7894736842 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209683373727 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608132242416 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362633992175 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124145774308 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242833389506 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.39 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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