Prison is the best punishment for criminals. Discuss.
There is no doubt that jail is a very tough experience for anyone who lives or stays even for a short time there. therefore, many people believe that such a punishment should be halted as it’s not always the best solution to minimizing the crime rate in their society. Alternatively seeking for the core of problem might be more effective. In contrast, lots of other people still find the prison is the optimal place for some dangerous individuals who have extremely bad influence on society. This essay aims to discuss both views in further detail before coming to a conclusion.
To begin with, it’s irrefutable that prison is the best sanction for vicious individuals who broke the rules and do some illegal activities. Moreover, it provides great lessons for other people who are aiming to do the same which might end them up at the jail. Therefore, such action makes the whole community safe and free from criminals. Furthermore, jails anywhere are a bad area to spend even for a few minutes over there. Thus, the majority of people are doing their best to avert such an experience in their whole lifetime, since it impacts on people images in their society. For instance, Syrian criminals who convicted by any illegal issue might find massive difficulties in finding jobs or be accepted by any reputable university. that's why entering prison might affect people lives in various ways.
On the flip side, jail might exacerbate criminals attitude and motivate them to do more crimes. To illustrate, prison contains different criminals who might be committed for small crimes such as robberies or very serious crimes such as murdering or drug trading or smuggling. Thus, dozen of stories and bad experience might be distributed throughout the prison and attracting others to perform more crimes. As a result, the crime level may drastically increase due to prison penalty. Therefore, putting all guilty individuals inside the jail will only postpone the issue. In fact, governments should investigate in the core of these issues to overcome and alleviate the level of crime. For example many advanced nations such as Canada are generating new punishment methods based on the crime type such as volunteering tasks. Such these measurements played an instrumental role in enhancing criminals attitude as well as prepare them to become a productive member of their society.
To sum up, prison arguably is a very debatable issue for a lot of people as some of them think that it’s the best way to cut the crime level while others believe that worsen that issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in contrast, in fact, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2159.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 428.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04439252336 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66904152174 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530373831776 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 695.7 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9756308792 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.80952381 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.380952381 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262904699576 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697876087039 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471175338131 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168281928878 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476330202844 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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