Many old cities around the world are going through a major process of modernization. What are the advantages and disadvantages of modernization?
In recent era, changes from old fashioned to modern style is necessary for ancient cities. Most underdeveloped cities are changing to the modernization globally. With such changes, there are some pros and cons to it. This essay will highlight such advantages and disadvantages.
Firstly, any new changes gives immense pleasure and satisfaction to our day today lives. Old cities are far backwards in progress in term of an electricity, super mall, residential buildings and an employment opportunities. Government are taking good steps for removing such hurdles in old cities. With such improvement, more industries will come and establish their business, which will reduce unemployment rates and increase standard of living of people. Moreover, people will enjoy all new amenities like super mall, complexes, good infrastructure and no shortage of electricity.
On the other hand, with such changes we give rise to pollution and deforestation. Pollution such as noise, air and water will increase at alarming rate, as many industries will route to old cities. Such pollutions are adversely affect the life of people, as a result, not only life expectancy will be reduced but also clean air will be polluted. Lastly, rates for the land will increase rapidly. Big industrialist will switch their business from urban cities to rural cities, they will need huge space and will acquire land. This will result demand for land which result sudden increase in price for it.
To sum up, change from old style to modern style for any cities brings new technology, latest facilities and employment opportunities, along with problems of crime rates, pollution and deforestation too follow
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: affected
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Suggestion: , the latest
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Suggestion: to follow
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, so, such as, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35094339623 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.913686538 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611320754717 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6185387332 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.625 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0853974771852 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347794833058 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039882404125 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0700847422401 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03649530922 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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