Many people are choosing finding information online rather than in books. Is this development positive or negative?
These days our live is changing and turned to be easy, we can check or buy anything we need only by one click on the internet and delivered to us. Many people started using the internet to search for information’s rather than in books. Some think that this development is positive, others believe it is negative.
On one hand, nowadays people refer to follow the latest technology and use it during their life or work for research instead of books. First, for many people finding information online is easier than books, since the number of data is big and easy to search for deep details. Second, people spend less time to do research and won’t go to search in libraries or bookshops to borrow or buy booklet to find the info they need, they print out the parts directly from the website. Moreover, searching online will cost less money, since most of the information is free and if they want to pay, the cost is cheaper. For example, Google and Wikipedia both websites facilitate our studies and work, most of the information are free and simple to find.
On the other hand, some people see that look over books still the best way to retrieve data. First, using the internet will limit people thinking and make them depend on the websites data, without doing their own research and study. Second, part of the people encourages others to stay in touch with books, keep reading and write their own stories by collecting info from others and their imaginations, to fresh their minds. However, some human being believes that important information can’t be found online, since there are many secret data no one can access to without authority. For example, in my country if a student wants an information for his thesis from the government archive, he needs to take the permission first, because the info cannot be found online and shared in public.
Finally, two different views for many people, some prefer finding information online and it is positive development, others believe the opposite. In my opinion, I think that everything can be done online to make our lives easier and if we need any important information, there must be a way by sending an email to concerned party for approval or pay an amount for it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'websites'' or 'website's'?
Suggestion: websites'; website's
...le thinking and make them depend on the websites data, without doing their own research ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, still, for example, i think, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1852.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79792746114 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51108311366 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536269430052 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.5818336403 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.466666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257407398293 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965938443078 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904948056593 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161554970522 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496541111859 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.