Recently, it is common for people not to know their neighbors, what is the cause of this problem? What can be done to solve this problem?
Nowadays, people are moving toward new neighborhoods, and getting in contact with new cultures and way of living. Lately, people don’t know their neighbors or even don’t see them, but there are reasons causing this to happen, and solutions must be done to solve this problem.
On One hand, several reasons let people not to know their neighbors and causing some problems. First, people are living their villages or countries and migrating towards a new place searching for new opportunities, which keep them away from social life. Second, these days, most people are busy at work, they don’t have free time to meet their friends or have a small conversation, even between a one family. Moreover, one of the main causes is trust, there is a big lack between people’s which lead to conflict and jealousy, causing people not to know each other and get close as before. For example, in our neighborhood we used to stay all friends together, due to our new responsibilities and jobs we rarely meet or hangout.
On the other hand, solutions must be found to get neighbors together as previously. First, people can schedule and devote some time to have contact with their neighbors. Second, people in one neighborhood can have an association, which will plan meetings or activities to keep them close and knew each other. However, neighbors must build a trust relationship in between, act as one family since sometimes one will call for an assistant and won’t find anyone except his neighbor to rely and trust him. For example, in our building all the neighbors are as one family, once I had a health issue, I couldn’t find any one except my neighbor who gave me help.
In conclusion, social life changed, misconduct and trust between people is absent, that’s why people don’t know their neighbors these days. Therefore, people must find solutions to turn their lives to a peaceful and better way of living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 621, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...ad a health issue, I couldn't find any one except my neighbor who gave me help. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00617283951 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75428335825 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533950617284 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9756153243 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.857142857 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216090633067 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832043415099 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809707058314 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152571672184 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765294781445 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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