Many people argue that eating junk food has led to an unhealthy lifestyle. This problem has become more common among young people these days. Do you agree or disagree that junk food is the cause of the issue?
It is believed that overindulgence in fast food become the reason for an unhygienic way of life, and this situation is more prevalent in youngsters. I completely endorse this notion that although junk food is the reason for unhealthy life, along with this excessive use of technology is equally liable.
The most compelling reason to support this argument is that because of the processed food, the obesity level in young ones is being consistently rising. The procedure of producing this food is extremely unhealthy as they add lots of preservatives and artificial ingredients, which makes it lack of basic nutrition's and energy and immoderate consumption of this food has an abundance of detrimental effects . If the young generation adopt this kind of diet into their daily routine, this will lead to be overweight because of the unwanted accumulation of fats in their bodies. For example, according to the recent survey that has been conducted by Oxford University reveals that now youth has experienced 10 % more body mass index ratio as compared to the previous generatons because of the heavily relying on unhealthy food. Hence, health problems are hiking due to modern food preferences.
In addition, another concrete reason for inappropriate health is over dependence on technology, as now the young generation prefer to spend the prolific amount of time on modern gadgets, such as mobile phones and computers. Since they are more susceptible to these updated facilities, it compels them to spend significant time on various social websites or on video games, which leads to a sedentary lifestyle and also causes mental problems.For instance, suicide cases have increased among teenagers under the side effects of technology advancements. Therefore, extreme involvement in technological objects become the driving force behind mental inefficiencies.
In conclusion, while convenience food does not merely impede the physical requirements but I believe that it also has perilous impacts on the mental wellness of the young generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43260188088 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02611376921 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623824451411 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.2943045787 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.545454545 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241952140093 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879409715486 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455543652095 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131119039452 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615129076799 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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