Many people believe that big businesses in addition to generating profits should be involved in and responsible for the social life of the community. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion
Nowadays, there is a controversial debate regarding the social responsibility of big corporations. As far as I am concerned, while firms are committed to their shareholders to increase their investment and generate profits, businesses are responsible to the community as their stakeholders and the reasons behind my reasoning will be discussed in this essay.
Firms that are actively engaged in increasing the social life of the community could benefit from this practice in a number of ways. Firstly, people would notice the social activities of firms and become loyal customers, even if it means they have to pay more. For instance, in the latest trends in the Wallstreet, people invest in socially responsible funds, which have a strict code of conduct to not invest in any irresponsible firms, such as tobacco or gambling. These trends indicate that people have no problems with losing profits as long as their investments benefit society. Secondly, this practice would also help with human capital, since not only more talented workforces are interested to work in such a firm, but also current employees become more loyal to the firm's value and would not leave for better salaries or perks. Thus, by helping the lives of people, businesses could raise their social values, which in the long-term means more profitability and growth.
Admittedly, firms pay their duties by following the law and paying taxes, which covers a significant part of the government's budget. Authorities could spend the money based on the needs and requirements of the nation. However, critics believe that taxes are not enough and big businesses, such as Facebook, Google, and Amazon, have other responsibilities to people, as their general stakeholders. For instance, gender equality, minority hiring or helping with educational systems are some of the requests asked by activists from big corporations.
In conclusion, I think firms should consider actively increasing the life of the society, since not only it would be beneficial for them in the in long-term, but also it is part of their indirect responsibility to society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, while, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28486646884 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96770621115 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543026706231 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.8674572932 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9230769231 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172946864802 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644223066329 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381449136989 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10862276069 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256369012635 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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