Providing the population with food is one of the main responsibilities of the country. While I believe that countries should be able produce food for their own people , I am also optimistic about importing them.
On the one hand , being the self-sufficient in growing their own crops for the entire population has some beneficial sides . Firstly, there is no doubt that the food products which are produced within the country are more healthier as they do not require much time to get from farm to table. Reducing travel time makes it possible to transport the food while
they are still fresh. Second reason why people support producing the food within the country is that , they usually would be cheaper . Because, the imported food always requires transport fee and tariffs. Thus in my opinion the food usually comes in higher prices.
On the other hand, I believe that it is not easy for some countries to supply their populations' needs in food. This is because some countries have limited land for growing crops for the entire residents. For example Singapore rely on imports of food as it is one fully urbanized country in the world . Furthermore , we often need imported food due to the fact that not all food products are found in our country . For instance mangoes only grow in tropical areas and definitely it is difficult for landlocked countries to provide their populations with these kinds of food products.
In conclusion, I admit that encouraging local foods is important as they are more reliable and less expensive . However we can not simlpy ignore iported foods since there are some countries that dependent on other countries for some kind of foods.
- The maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 60
- The diagrams below show the stages in the development of simple cooking equipment Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisos where relevant 79
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide CO2 emissions per person in the United Kindom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features 67
- Many people believe that countries should produce food for all population eats and import food as little as possible To what extent do you agree or disagree 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98576512456 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61792276805 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565836298932 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0550605833 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5333333333 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397365466653 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147979771854 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607126693089 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234547651588 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649927275623 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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