Many people believe that newspapers are not necessary anymore. Others think newspapers have some benefits. In which extent do you agree, and give your relevant reasons.
In today’s world, the news is uploaded on the Internet easily due to the substantial development of technology. Most people think that newspapers now are becoming less and less necessary because of the up-to-date access to the e-news while others believe that newspapers are still important in many ways. From my view point, I agree with both views and will discuss the reasons in the following passages.
Firstly, newspapers now are probably less important to the younger generations. It is more convenient for the younger generations to access the news on portable devices. Due to news which have been uploaded on the Internet, young people can get updated information more quickly and more effortlessly. In addition, gadgets are usually small in size, which is better than newspapers, which must be expanded in order for people to read. Nevertheless, younger citizens are able to receive multiple types or “brands” of news. As a result, the information is more diverse. Last but not least, young generations can also give comments on the news, which helps in correcting or improving the news.
Secondly, on the other hand, newspapers are still necessary in some ways. For older generations, using gadgets to approach e-news is fairly disturbing. The lack of interaction with the gadgets of older people causes the issue that they don’t know how to use the devices, which leads to the difficulties of accessing news websites or apps. Moreover, as a result of the diversity of information, older citizens are confused and can not recognize if the news is confirmed or not, which lead to the point of misunderstandings. Furthermore, using gadgets to read news for a long period of time will cause eye problems easily, which is an annoying disadvantage.
To conclude, newspapers are not really essential to young generations because of the massive development in technology. For older people, however, there are definitely some drawbacks of e-news, which show that ordinary newspapers are still necessary. As a result, I strongly agree with both views.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: small
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Line 5, column 575, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
..., using gadgets to read news for a long period of time will cause eye problems easily, which i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, still, while, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21921921922 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95945907856 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525525525526 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5882163613 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5555555556 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210928418963 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661322797109 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729112673963 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142195488887 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459623340969 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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