In the current edge, most people are influenced by social networking sites. some people argued that the media have made detrimental effects not only on individuals but also on society.i disagree with the opinion that these sites are harmful
In the contemporary world, social media became an indispensable part of every corner of human life. There are several benefits to using these sites in personal matters and also for society
To individuals, these sites have become a cheaper way to connect with their friend's and relatives. To illustrate, we can stay updated about our friends and families that are happening around us. Video calling, sending messages like audio clips are the most advantageous made possible by these sites. An additional advantage is that people can leave an emergency message to get informed by friends and family.in other ways, if a person has got stuck somewhere that can leave a message by sharing the location .inspite of these advantages, some people are misusing these sites cheating by others and making a disturbance in others life.
To society, with the help of these sites, people can make group decisions, conduct classes by connecting people from anywhere from the world. In pandemic times, these sites made a giant role in all lives online watching their loved one's funeral services, marriage occasions on life.
Moreover, people got promoted by expressing their talents and abilities through these social media networks. Even though these possibilities are there , some people would take a flaw by using these days cheating others. Hacking one's details is the most common malpractice seen through these sites.
To conclude, even though there are harmful sides , the beneficial matters cannot be ignored
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25806451613 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55778570286 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.9405885516 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.25 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113492167492 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461627397321 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444769848529 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669553460481 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521746217958 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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