It is an undeniable fact that nowadays celebrities lifestyle has a great influence on the lives of common people and they tend to follow their favourite celebrity a lot. Some people consider it as a positive growth however, I feel this imitation has a detrimental effect. I will be discussing my views and reasons in the subsequent paragraphs.
It has a big impact in the changing lifestyle of teenagers and youngesters. There are plethora of reasons to support my viewpoint. First of all, it affects their pockets as in order to copy a popular face, they spend a lot of money in buying similar clothes, accessories and other possessions wore by their favourite star which are way expensive. Moreover, sometimes a popular star endorses some life taking products that can have noxious impact on one's life like tobacco, liquor, cigarettes etcetera. However, in reality celebrities themselves do not consume or use these products but they encourage other people to use them.
On the other hand, some people feel that celebrities also motivate people to contribute in the growth and development of nation. For example, they encourage people to cast their vote during elections. In case of any natural calamity, they appeal to the people to come forward to help those who are in need. Celebrities can also alter orthodox mentality of many people. Celebrities can be used to spread awareness among people for various issues like education, healthcare and other human rights.
To recapitulate, a celebrity affects a lives of many people he or she should kept in mind not to encourage something which will bring a negative impact on nation as well as someone's life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 38, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a life' or simply 'lives'?
Suggestion: a life; lives
... To recapitulate, a celebrity affects a lives of many people he or she should kept in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, i feel, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09782608696 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80591790299 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576086956522 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0538070016 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213757972339 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686369285842 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589673592442 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131992137233 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499889173307 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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