It is an undeniable fact that people who know their talent and decide their aim of life and started to work according to a required set of rule are mostly achieve their goal. These people achieve the true level of success and satisfaction because of their keen interest. I also agree with this argument at extreme level, however, there are few facts which conflict this statement. I am articulating my points of views in the ensuing paragraphs.
To commence with, in this contemporary world where every person try to earn more and more which requires a hectic and stressful schedule, owing to this they loose their interest in the work which make their job monotonous and life as well. However, masses who begin their work on a decided career path earlier, not only earn money but also get a lofty position and set an example for the youth of nation. For instance, Sachin Tendulakar, who known as god of Indian cricket has started to play cricket since his childhood and he not only get an enormous amount of money but also become famous across worldwide because of his glorious cricket. He was able to obtain such glory because of his keen interest and satisfying working life.
On the other side, in country like India where is competition is too hard because of the gigantic population, people have to choose other career objective after not getting success in the particular field. It takes a major part of life to work in different field which might cause of dissatisfaction.
Although, there are ample of way to lead satisfactory working life like give some space to hobbies, regular exercises, cultural activities at workplace and enthusiastic environment.
To recapitulate, taking into account all the facts mentioned above above, I firmly believe that choosing career objective in the early ages and set a goal according to that goal will assist in cognitive way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'achieved'.
Suggestion: achieved
...ng to a required set of rule are mostly achieve their goal. These people achieve the tr...
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Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
... stressful schedule, owing to this they loose their interest in the work which make t...
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Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a known'.
Suggestion: who is a known
...ation. For instance, Sachin Tendulakar, who known as god of Indian cricket has started to...
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Line 9, column 62, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: above
...ng into account all the facts mentioned above above, I firmly believe that choosing career ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92767295597 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62679527177 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59748427673 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.2060315058 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.583333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271349828161 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09213088561 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540416441003 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125811212459 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628612632571 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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